Oh, my. That was a good story. Vivid and heartbreaking.
Gritty and disturbing. What a well told tale. Good job!Doc
Oh that was intense. The end was very ... satisfying...! :-)
This was an incredibly well told story, very disturbing and very satisfying. The ending actually gave me chills. In a good way!
I'm so sorry I missed this one. That's me this time: A day late and a dollar short. Let us know when it's published elsewhere so I can read it. I would appreciate it.