Apr 9, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday - Cycle 26

Taking this one down due to the fact that I'm planning to submit elsewhere.

5 comments:

  1. Oh, my. That was a good story. Vivid and heartbreaking.

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  2. Gritty and disturbing. What a well told tale. Good job!

    Doc

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  3. Oh that was intense. The end was very ... satisfying...! :-)

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  4. This was an incredibly well told story, very disturbing and very satisfying. The ending actually gave me chills. In a good way!

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  5. I'm so sorry I missed this one. That's me this time: A day late and a dollar short. Let us know when it's published elsewhere so I can read it. I would appreciate it.

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